The Sweeper on the Night Shift
- 4 minute read
- Ages 10-13
- Horror Stories for Kids
My mother was a nurse and did nights at a hospital for twenty-two years, and this is the only story she ever told me about it.
She did not tell it as a ghost story. She told it as something that happened.
The third floor
The third floor corridor was long and had a bend in the middle, so from the nurses' station you could see about half of it.
Between two and four in the morning it was completely empty, and it was cleaned at that hour by a sweeper who came round with a wide brush and did the whole floor.
My mother never learned his name. He was an old man, thin, and he did the corridor the same way every night: the far end first, then round the bend, then the near stretch past the station, and he never spoke to anybody and nobody spoke to him.
This went on for years.
The night she said good morning
One night in her ninth year she was at the station at about three and he came round the bend, sweeping, and for no particular reason she looked up and said good morning.
He stopped.
He looked at her for what she said was a very long time, and he did not look angry or frightened, and she said afterwards that the only word for his expression was surprised.
Then he went back to sweeping and finished the corridor and went round the corner at the end.
The roster
The next day she happened to be looking at the cleaning roster for another reason, and she noticed that nobody was rostered for the third floor between two and four.
The third floor was cleaned at six, by the day team, before the wards woke up.
She asked the supervisor about the old man with the wide brush.
The supervisor said there was no old man. There were four cleaners on nights and all four were women and all four worked the ground and first floors.
What my mother did
She did not tell anybody else.
She kept working nights on that floor for another thirteen years, and she saw him perhaps forty more times, and she never spoke to him again.
And she said, when she told me, that this was not because she was frightened of him.
"He was doing his job," she said. "Every night, the same way, in an empty corridor, and he had been doing it a long time. I had no business interrupting him."
The part I asked about
I asked her whether she was ever afraid.
She said only once, and it was not one of the forty times.
It was the first time, the night she said good morning, and it was not while he was looking at her.
It was afterwards, when she thought about his face properly.
"He was surprised," she said. "Which means it had been a long time since anybody had."
Moral of the story
She saw him forty times and left him alone. Not every strange thing needs to be investigated, and knowing which ones do is most of the skill.
Questions and answers
- When was the third floor corridor swept?
Between two and four in the morning, by an old man with a wide brush.
- What happened when the narrator's mother said good morning?
He stopped, looked at her for a long time with an expression she described as surprised, then went back to sweeping.
- What did she discover on the roster?
That nobody was scheduled to clean the third floor at that hour; it was done at six by the day team.
- What did the supervisor say?
That there was no old man, and that all four night cleaners were women working the ground and first floors.
- Why did she never speak to him again?
She said he was doing his job in an empty corridor and she had no business interrupting him.
Word meanings
- roster
- A list showing who is working and when.
- supervisor
- A person in charge of other workers.
- ward
- A room in a hospital with several beds.
- stretch
- A continuous length of something, such as a corridor.
Questions about The Sweeper on the Night Shift
What is the moral of The Sweeper on the Night Shift?
That not every strange thing is a threat or a mystery to be solved. The mother's response is respect rather than investigation.
Is this story frightening?
It is more sad than frightening, which is deliberate. The last line is the only genuinely unsettling moment.
Why is his surprise the frightening detail?
Because it means nobody had spoken to him for a very long time, and he had gone on sweeping the corridor anyway.
What age is this for?
Ages ten and above. There is nothing violent and no threat, and it works well as a story to talk about afterwards.